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Shelvs Fleurima
Hello this project took me a month to come up with. It’s an underwater gollum protecting the honor of a jelly fish lasso from those helpless romantic humans. Something is off with the final painting, but I don’t know exactly what? Any criticism is welcome.
Nicolas CATALDO
Hello Shelvs :), the piece feels a bit flat, by that I mean background, foreground and middle ground should be separated value wise.This might help also with the reading of the artwork. For me the point of interest here is the reflection of the sun on the water as it use a value and a color temperature contrast, if you want you viewer to look the action on the front you may have to reduce contrast. The background may also may have too many little shape dragging attention. These are of course only suggestions, you'll see what's better for your artwork. Hope this helps :)
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