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yuri
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3yr
yuri
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3yr
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These are very clean, good work. But I feel that your drawings are a bit stiff. Try using more curves.
Well done Yuri!
Those are really good!
With these few plans you can easily guess the environment you have in mind.
yuri
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3yr
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The muscles makes me confusing which plane I can observe. Especially the planes where I marked ”?” was really confusing. I would be happy to have any critiques!
So, the trick is to try to ignore them.
Look for landmarks in the skeleton.
For example, figure three, you clearly see the clavicles, the rib cage so you're seeing it from above, not from below as you drew it.
By changing the perspective that crease that confused you makes sense; the torso is rotating and so are the muscles and skin, following the ribcage.
4 is right, those parts are in perspective, as is 5 where you see the top of the ribcage.
Nicole Lee
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3yr
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Hi, I finished Proko's anatomy course and am currently studying Watts on Bridgman book. Below is a drawing using photo reference from his book. I mimicked his design for shadow shape but also try to create my own. Not sure if I can upload the photo from his book so didn't provide the reference photo here. Can anyone please provide critique on this drawing and where I can improve? Thank you!
yuri
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3yr
I understand that it’s so important to critique and help others, but since I’m not a good artist, I feel so sorry to say something to others. Additionally, I’m not an native English user and so afraid to say something rude not on purpose. I should have studied English harder🥲
You could give advices only when you are sure, it's ok.
But in other cases you also can share your opinion (just say that it's not advice, just your point of view). If you are wrong, someone (maybe author) will correct you. It will be very useful for you.
For learning english try "Basu". Very interesting app with different exercises. Also "Tandem" is cool app for talking/chatting with native speakers. I use both
yuri
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3yr
I noticed the critiques now, I couldn’t put into practice🥲 I have to be more and more careful about foreshortening from next boxes.
