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Kal
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3d
added comment inThis drawing is lacking something…
Its a nicely done drawing. What I see is 6 equally sized shapes of foliage. Maybe that is a composition improvement to make at least one larger, dominate shape and a few smaller supporting shapes. The whole mass of the foliage appears to be small overall compared to the proportions of the trunk. You could scale up the overall size of the mass of foliage. Trunk could use a little more taper shape too bottom to top. Anyway, that's what I see. I feel bad stating all this because you can draw better than me. (I really like the line quality and style and the twist of the trunk)
Tom Romaniuk
2d
I see no reason you need to feel bad, although I do it too when I leave my feedback to others. Because I always find the others better in drawing than myself. But everybody can comment. It does not mean that someone can draw is better in observing!! Thank you very much for your part. Very helpful
