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@dnlwan123
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2yr
added comment inProject - Simplify from Observation
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Second attempt. Any critic appreciated. Thanks!,!,!!

@dnlwan123
2yr
Didnt think it had enough darkness in the middle so i added a bit
@dnlwan123
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2yr
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Hello, I’m new at drawing and would appreciate all the criticisms. Thank you
Hi @dnlwan123, great attempt at the exercise. I feel like your pear is a good version of the pear in the reference. The shapes feel really nice too.
My suggestions for improvement would be to stick to straight lines and to work on cleaning up your shading. By clean up, I mean make the lines so close together that it looks like one smooth tone.