:) no worries, just keep practicing!! Looking at your drawings, first thing I notice is that you're missing the gesture phase + jumped to just dropping landmarks. Think of the 30-sec gesture as the first building block - it isn't gonna get everything *perfect* but it's going to be the foundational 'feeling' of what you're going for. Next time you give this exercise a go, try and copy Stan's process. Get the gesture in, then start with the major landmarks you can see (acromion, sacrum, PSIS/ASIS, etc) and then go for main musculature/fat. Build it brick by brick, working from most important elements to more specific details.