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Kaelin Harris
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Did 30 beans yesterday and today. It s a really fun exercise!
Chuck
24d
I am a beginner and all ill do here is try to discern what i think the subject of the bean was doing for the first 10, in that way it will be a critique of how well you communicated the tilt, lean, forshortening or twist!
1. slight front lean
2. left tilt w/ front lean
3. forshortened front lean
4. upward tilt
5. right tilt and forshortening
6. classic twist
7. right tilt
8. upward tilt
9. classic twist
10. left tilt
I really like your use of line weights for the outline i think it just looks clean. There are a few beans like 24,4,7 that i thought should have a centerline to emphasize their flow through space a little better. But these shapes are strong and really sell the illusion.