Here's a one off comic page I'm working on. I got some loose figures in and I am interested in your thoughts on the gesture and composition. In case it's not apparent, she's bouncing off of clotheslines while falling into the alley below (There will be more clothes bouncing on the lines/flying through the air). If there are any additional things that standout to you, or you have something cool to suggest, feel free to share those as well. Note: The initial preview is pretty hard to look at, but if you click "open original" it should be pretty sharp.