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Stephen Worthington
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11d
added comment inProject - Dynamic Shapes
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I drew 6 of these before watching the demo/critique and 3 after (so far)
I think I can definitely level some critique at them myself. Before watching the demo, I was trying to exaggerate the gesture rather than emphasize it, which made for some slightly more extreme poses but less interesting shapes.
As well, I can definitely still see that my line quality is lacking - Stan's sketch lines look confident and intentional, mine still feel messy. Though I tried to be aware of this drawing after the demo, and do think there's improvement.
Any other advice/critique gratefully received!
Stephen Worthington
11d
Post-demo attempts
Stephen Worthington
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8mo
Asked for help
Like a lot of other people those laces took me a good while! And I definitely think they could be a lot smoother (maybe with more simplification?)
On the whole I'd say I'm happy with these. Certainly not perfect, but if I was perfect I wouldn't be taking a course! If anybody has suggestions for improvements I'd love to hear them.
Stephen Worthington
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8mo
Are people taking a 2 week pause in the course while doing this challenge, or doing it concurrently with the lessons?
harry john
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8mo
5/14
didn’t have time to draw for the past few days 😭 hopefully my streak won’t break again
Also I tried to draw simple objects like my wallet, but now they seem floaty? Are there any tips on how to make it look like it’s on the table?
I think the floatiness may come because you've not captured the shadows of the objects. Our minds are trained to use so many cues to relate objects to each other in space, and shadow is definitely a big one
First image is yesterday's pear before watching the demo and critique, second is today's pear
Happy with the improvement, though think I prefer HB over 2B for the lighter tone. One big difference in the second image is that I used the tip of the pencil rather than broad side for shading, tricky to get a smooth shade but good to practice!
I can see a lot of improvement. The clarity of the tones is much nicer and the shape more defined! Very nice
Stephen Worthington
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8mo
Asked for help
My attempt at the pear before watching the demo.
The 5 values aspect got away from me a little, and I definitely relied more on the outlines than I should have (I re-lined them which I definitely think detracts from it overall)
Happy for any other critique, positive or negative, thanks!