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Dan B
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4yr
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These are pretty good :) Just minor things, mostly just in watching the perspective a bit closer, for instance the centre line in the first one doesn't match her belly button, and for the second one you should be able to see the bottom of the torso box.
Steve Lenze
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4yr
Hey jiayogg,
I think these look pretty good. the only one I would suggest you revisit is the fourth one. I think you drew the torso too stiff, you could put some curve in it. Right now it looks like the torso and pelvis don't really relate to each other. Nice 3D quality to these, keep it up :)
Luigi Manese
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4yr
Hi @jiayogg these are some nice studies! So, one thing I wanted to point out is that even as a robo bean exercise, things like gesture and perspective are still going to be important for fully utilizing this tool. I think you can exaggerate the gesture a bit on the top right bean and the middle left bean. These curving poses give you a great opportunity to push the curve in your bean drawing.
For the bottom left bean, I think the perspective may have gotten away from you just a tad bit. Your box for the torso is a bit off, and I think it may have been because you drew the right side slightly longer than the left side. Also, don't be afraid to draw through the form in the hip area for that one, just so we can see if you have a solid understanding of turning the box of the hip in space.
For the bottom right bean, We are seeing too much of the backside. The figure has a pretty substantial curve in his back, which I think is where the confusion may have come from, but if you look closely, we can see the side of his obliques and the side of his chest. The box should be drawn more from a side angle to more accurately convey the twist of that figure.
Hope this helps! And let me know if there is anything that I can clear up for you
Hey everyone!
Just looking for feedback on my robo-bean attempts. Sorry for the messiness. Using a new brush that I'm not used to yet but love anyway.
Hey everyone!
I'm new to figure drawing and I'm looking for feedback on my beans. I used poses 1-39 of the Large pack of Aaron posing from Proko. I'm guessing I can't post those here so I'm not sure if there is a good way to give the reference images. Hopefully it's still possible to get some feedback without them? Any suggestions for providing reference pose images in future posts?
Thanks. Hope you are all well!
-Rob