I hate to criticize you so I’ll start with what I like.i think your fruit drawing is a nice starting point. From here you should add those dimensions like it says in the video. Some tips I’d give, maybe a bit cheating, but how about taking a pic of your fruit, turning it black and white and if you can turn up the saturation. Don’t forget what he told us to do in the video. You need to block out those values. Start with the dark value first and go from there. Also when I did mine, what really helped was squinting my eyes and focusing on the shades of value rather than any outline. Keep going! You got this. We all begin somewhere! Imagine when you look back at this and see how far you’ve come! I’m only an amateur giving advice but I hope that helped a little. Remember to do the 5 values. Because from what I can see it seems like you aren’t following the point of the assignment which isn’t outline but value