Critique - Session 6
Critique - Session 6
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Critique - Session 6
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Julian Müller
Hey Len, absolutely! I'd be honored if you want to play around with the design, just give me a tag @milerski_artwork on instagram if you do :) thank you so much for the critique, I've been off drawing robots a bit to spend time learning gouache, but maybe this is the call to paint a robot in that medium!
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Len Nicholas
Let's take a look at your submissions to see what is working and what can be improved.
Pixel
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Hey Len, thank you so much for the critique! I definitely see what you mean with the legs. Perspective is still tricky to me, so posing the legs like this is a bad habit I'm trying to shake. I think I got the pose from a tortoise reference and the legs were pretty much posed like this, but I can see that it's a better design decision to do the harder thing. I'll definitely keep it in mind for future designs. Thank you for drawing an elipse over the h2O tank thingy, I immediately saw what I did wrong, definitely a good reminder to get back to elipse practice and actually revisit and upload the assignments :) And THANK YOU for explaining that bounce light effect. I didn't know that it gets warmer when it gets bounced off a surface, so I just used blue-ish or simply white bounce light in some areas. I have been drawing and painting a lot of dragons lately, but I see this as my call to do a mechanised dragon and get back into robots as a whole (after doing the assingments) :)
Len Nicholas
no problem, I'm glad it helped . Keep Keep those drawing coming
Julian Müller
Hey Len, absolutely! I'd be honored if you want to play around with the design, just give me a tag @milerski_artwork on instagram if you do :) thank you so much for the critique, I've been off drawing robots a bit to spend time learning gouache, but maybe this is the call to paint a robot in that medium!
Len Nicholas
thank you so much, keep up the great work.
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