Lines could be cleaner but overall pretty happy with how this first attempt turned out

This was a really fun but challenging exercise for me. Struggled on simplifying complex images and not drawing with my fingers. Lots of proportion issues but overall happy with my attempt

Here are my first and second attempts. Second attempt was after watching the demo, but still without his example. Tried to shade better and think about things in terms of planes. Still tons of room to improve though

Here is my pear. Really fun exercise, and a really rough attempt but I had fun! Please feel free to citique